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7th November - Erin

Erin wrote the story of the Celtic Queen Boudicca.

Dear Erin,

I was so impressed by the quality and quantity of the work you produced. You used your topic knowledge and facts to write an accurate account. You also used your literacy skills and included many of the skills that we have been working.

Your openers were brilliant – Over 2000 years ago, When they got there, Although the Romans were highly trained, Finally at the last battle.

You included interesting vocabulary choices such as destroyed, humiliated, disappointed, captured.

Well done Erin, I enjoyed reading your work.